April 13,2000
P.O. Box 36
BIIT University
Beijing,China 100000
Dear Sir/Madam:
Are you searching for a telecommunications manager with expertise in project management and team leadership?
I specialize in creating and implementing high-performance strategies that directly impact growth and profitability of large telecommunications companies. In addition to my knowledge of business processes, I also offer proficiency in telecom software development and cutting-edge technologies.
I am relocating to Shenzhen and would be interested in opportunities with your firm. Currently, I serve as manager for BIT Company‘s Information Industry Division. Briefly, some of my accomplishments include:
Developed a tool to track and forecast price,quantity,and revenue, which enables client to monitor business performance
Implemented a customized end-to-end testing process and SQL database
My business acumen, technical expertise, and leadership capabilities have contributed to a number of successful projects.
The enclosed resume outlines my credentials and accomplishments in greater detail. I would welcome an opportunity to meet with you for a personal interview.
Sincerely,
xx
英文求職信注意事項
過于關注工作職責
履歷中最普遍的錯誤就是將履歷變成一份枯燥乏味的職責責任清單。許多人甚至會用他們公司的工作守則作為改善履歷的指南。創建一份履歷是對上述剩余部分的刪節，你不該僅僅敘述必需的信息，還要說明你的每個公司的不同經歷。要提供公司怎樣因你的表現而大獲其利的具體例子。當彰顯自己的成就時，請問自己以下問題：
如何更好完成工作
你或你的團體所面臨的是怎樣的問題或挑戰?你是怎么樣克服困難的?你努力的結果怎么樣?公司怎樣從你的表現中獲利?
目標敘述過于華麗
許多候選人在履歷的開始部分的目標敘述時就讓人興趣寡然。最糟糕的目標敘述一般是這樣開始的：”一個具挑戰性的職位不僅讓我有機會為公司做貢獻而且也給我以成長和進步的機會。”這樣的敘述早已用濫掉了，而且太過平常，浪費了寶貴的履歷空間。如果你正在寫履歷，試試用小紙條來代替目標敘述，在小紙條上你可以說說你的工作或你專長的領域。
篇幅過短和過長
太多的人想把他們的經歷壓縮在一頁紙上，因為他們曾經聽說履歷最好不要超過一頁。當將履歷格式化地縮到一頁時，許多求職者就刪除了他們給人深刻印象的成就。反之亦然。就拿那些在履歷上用幾頁紙漫談不相干的或者冗長的經歷的候選人來說，看的人很容易就會覺得無聊。所以，當你寫履歷時，試著問自己：”這些陳述會讓我得到面試的機會嗎?”然后，僅僅保留那些會回答”是”的信息。
決定其篇幅的因素包括有職業、企業、工作經歷、教育和造詣程度等等。最重要的就是，履歷中的每一個字都要能夠推銷該候選人。